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2020北京中考模拟英语作文

北京中考英语作文篇1

Hi Helen,

I’m sorry to hear about your trouble. Don’t worry. It’s quite common for friends to misunderstand each other. I think there is nothing wrong for you to prepare for the competition, but you made a mistake when you lied to Judy.Here is some advice for you to repair your friendship.

First of all, you’d better talk to her and say sorry for your dishonesty. Then, you should tell her the truth and explain to her how important the speech competition was to you. If she refused to talk to you, you can write a letter or find another friend to help you. As long as you try your best and show you care much about your friendship, I believe she will understand you.

As an old saying goes “A friend in need is a friend indeed”, I think true friends should help and understand each other, and honesty comes first in friendship. I hope you can be good friends again. Yours, Lily

北京中考英语作文篇2

Everyone has his own dream. I want to be a good doctor in the future.

The reason is that some doctors saved my life after I was badly hurt in a traffic accident. I was deeply impressed by their medical skils and greatly moved by their care for me. From then on, to be a doctor in the future has always been my dream.

Our dreams can’t be realized unless we make all our efforts. Therefore, the first thing I will do is to remember what my dream is. I won’t let it leave my mind, because it will help me to keep trying and fighting for what I want. What’s more, I will do my best to increase my knowledge and improve my abilities to prepare myself for an excellent doctor. Last but not least, I will never give up. Though there may be difficulties on the road to my dream, I will always feel confident and work hard.

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用法和风格:

1、你把所有的旧词、过时的词都删掉了吗?

2、你用没用主动语态和动作性很强的动词?

3、对句子的长度和结构进行过修改吗?

4、有没有用到描述性的词和比喻的手法?

5、是否避免了使用空洞的修饰语,如“very”,“rather”,“somewhat”等等?

6、如果使用了缩略语,它们是否和文章的风格统一?省略号的位置对不对?

语法:

1、主语同动词单复数是否一致?

2、代词与先行词是否一致?

3、代词指代明确吗?(尤其要注意的是“this”和“that”)

4、修饰词的位置是否靠近被修饰词?

5、有没有悬垂结构或放错位置的修饰语?

6、动词的形式同时态及语态一致吗?

7、有没有逗号重叠的情况?

8、有没有发现不完整的句子?

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